What went well:
We were very oganised with our time as we got all the shots filmed within an hour
The editing was smooth and well put together e.g the transition when the detective gets up and then shouts "what do you want"
We obeyed the 180 degree rule
The background music signifies that the genre of the clip was a horror
Even better if:
Some shots were needed to be reshot because of the background noise
The lighting could have been changed to give it a darker effect to add to the horror aspect
We could have use a shot/ reverse shot
We could have used more props and costumes to show more information about the characters
Improvements
before we started to create our pre
At the moment, your blog is reaching a low LEVEL 2. This is because you have some of the work on there and have begun to expand on some of these pieces.
ReplyDeleteIn order to achieve a Level 3, it is vital that you include all work on your blog, ensuring that you reflect and interact with this work. It is important that you improve, based on peer and self-assessment, showing these improvements on your blog. Please ensure in your production, you say what you have 'learnt', rather than just the tasks you have done.
NSE
Level 3: 12–15 marks
• Planning and research evidence will be complete;
• There is proficient research into similar products and a potential target audience;
• There is proficient organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props;
• There is proficient work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding
There is a good level of care in the presentation of the research and planning;
• Time management is good.